GerboPawa's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sequenced - pico'd]

hi, i came to review one of your tracks, since you did the same with one of my songs.

first of all, im not a bit fan of the drums you used.

the bass and the melody are kinda cool, but toooooo much repetitive, even for house music, in my opinion.

lastly, every part in the song has the same volume, so i dont know if you made that intentionally or if it is just a Mastering problem; thats the first thing i thought, looking at the shape of the sound.

Sequenced responds:

Repetitive for house music is kind of the point. It's club music. The average house track is around 6-8 minutes long. 2 of those minutes are for DJs to mix in other songs.

House music does not need to be constantly changing. You pick one theme, and then stick with it. You do not need crazy buildups or fancy drops(unless youre making big room house). I got an even a longer house track thats even more 'repetive' than this one.

If you think this is repetitive... I recommend listening to progressive house on youtube. Look up Adriatique, GuyJ , or Cid Inc.

I do agree with you that the volume is stagnate in this track. It's not the one of my best mixed songs forsure.

[Bring That Beat]

very well made. fantastic basses, good melodies, nice drums and mastering.
it would have been better in my opinion if you added some chords and a sidechain effect to those.

Amazing song tho :3

Tagiito responds:

Thank you!

[Waves]

good. the volume of the melody is too high, also if you put a sub bass, or a generic bass, i'd suggest to add an equalizer to the melody and remove the basses, cause you already have them in another instrument.

also, i really like the arp, but it's always the same, and there is no main melody which usually is what makes a song amazing or just good.

anyway, i like the way you made the basses, the buildups are well made, the arp too.
4/5 stars :3

Tagiito responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism. Check out my other tracks!

[The Funeral]

Amazing! :3

Miyolophone responds:

Thanks Gerbo! :D

[Once Upon a Time]

Amazing :O

Miyolophone responds:

Ty Gerbo :3

[cloudfield - Joy]

damn... the drop is Amazing :D

CLOUDunderscore responds:

thanks :D

[Dalux - Aether]

ok... i followed you, SOOOOO AWESOMEEE

Dalux responds:

Thanks :)

[Dalux - Energy]

DAMN Daniel, this is awesome ;) will use it on GD :D

Dalux responds:

Glad you like it! Do you mind me asking what GD means?